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PostSubject: Why I've been gone, and hey help me out.   June 29th 2014, 9:42 pm

Hey, sorry I've been gone a while, a lot of stuff has happened in a short amount of time. Anyway for the last month I have been designing a game for the 2014 Indie game maker contest, and it would really be nice to get some feedback before voting opens of next week.

Heres the link to my game: http://contest.rpgmakerweb.com/game/view/id/193#.U7B-afldVfd

June 30 is the last day to edit things so it would be nice to get any feedback to change things beforehand.
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PostSubject: Re: Why I've been gone, and hey help me out.   June 29th 2014, 10:36 pm

I've used game maker for a long time. So i know a few things.

Here is my critique:
- The death scream is loud. I'm wearing headphones and that scream made me...  cringe. Not jump.

- When starting the game the first level becomes confusing. It's not a tutorial level for the player to understand and you get lost real quick without any real guide. A map or arrows would be helpful to navigate.

- The dialog box function is the biggest problem. I'm assuming you used the "Any Key" function for skipping dialog boxes. Every time I fell into the void and re-started at checkpoint the dialog box keeps re-appearing. I keep pressing the space or arrow key to keep the dialog moving a lot quick. A SKIP ALL dialog function would be the best solution.

That's my critique. If I can say anything else, it's that the music is great. Beautiful stuff.

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PostSubject: Re: Why I've been gone, and hey help me out.   June 29th 2014, 10:50 pm

I did use the any key function, so the person wouldn't have to worry about what button to press in the beginning, ill make the scream small and I am currently working on a compass. The dialog box appears because the fairy "caught" you to keep you from falling into the abyss. Thanks for playing.
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PostSubject: Re: Why I've been gone, and hey help me out.   June 30th 2014, 12:33 am

I know nothing about this!! Away! Lol

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PostSubject: Re: Why I've been gone, and hey help me out.   June 30th 2014, 11:01 am

jtrev23 wrote:
The dialog box appears because the fairy "caught" you to keep you from falling into the abyss. Thanks for playing.

I just wanted to point out that, while yes, displaying the dialog box is fine once when explaining it the player. All the other times breaks the flow of the game.
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PostSubject: Re: Why I've been gone, and hey help me out.   July 1st 2014, 8:08 pm

Voting is now open for the 2014 Indie Game Maker Competition!

Please vote for my game "Spirit Realm!" at the link below.

http://contest.rpgmakerweb.com/game/view/id/193#.U7MXZPldVfc

You have to create an account to vote. So please, create an account, search for my game "Spirit Realm", click the vote button, and help me win some money for college. Thank You!
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